The Magic of Editing—by A.M. Arthur


On my last visit to the Carina blog, I yakked a bit about coffee and how I got addicted to it. I’m not going to bore you with a repeat of that experience, but suffice it to say that coffee makes a strong reappearance in Maybe This Time. Ezra Kelley loves himself a good cup of java and is a self-professed coffee snob. Me? I’m good with a can of Folger’s. And don’t worry. This revisit to the world of coffee is actually a gateway into a different topic: the magic of editing.

While initially drafting this book (which was a writing speed-record for me because Ezra and Donner would not shut up), coffee was mentioned a few times in an off-handed way. Ezra drank it because I drink it, so why shouldn’t everyone do it? But as I delved deeper into the story, I realized that Ezra had no direction. He kind of floated through his life with no real goals for his future, and a lot of that is because of his upbringing, as well as a response to a trauma when he was sixteen. But a character who’s stuck in a rut and won’t break free doesn’t make for a very interesting novel, does it? He needed a way out of that rut.

Ezra’s lack of focus is what makes Donner Davis so good for him. Donner has a steady job, a hobby that he loves, and he has family that supports him. He’s the exact opposite of Ezra in those ways, and his steadiness is what kicks Ezra in the butt and makes him want to do something with his life. Thanks to his friendship with Alessandro and Jaime (from No Such Thing), Ezra’s new direction seemed pretty obvious to me: a coffee shop.

At that point in writing, Ezra knew crap about coffee. So I did some Googling of my own, went back to edit a few scenes, and viola! A coffee snob is born. It’s a fun character quirk that gives an aimless man much-needed focus, and a chance at an independent future.

What about you? If you could be an independent business owner, what is your dream business? A restaurant? A kitschy clothing store? A used record album shop?

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Maybe This Time 

As a regular at gay hotspot Pot O Gold, Ezra Kelley avoids his tangled emotions with the simplicity of one-night stands and attachment-free hookups. Until the night bartender Donner Davis picks him up off the floor after a misunderstanding and too much tequila. Ezra can’t remember the last time someone was . . . nice. It’s more than he deserves.

Witnessing his lover’s death two years ago has Donner trapped in a holding pattern—living in his sister’s basement, working at the Pot and flirting with the customers. He’s not above spending a night with the gorgeous Ezra, but love is not in the cards. That’s more than he’s ready for.

A passionate night leads to a connection that neither man expects, and they take the first steps to something that looks like a real relationship. But Ezra’s been running from himself so long he doesn’t know how to live any other way. And Donner can’t risk his heart just to lose everything again. They’ll both need the strength to let go of the past if they want to get it right this time.

About the author

No stranger to the writing world, A.M. Arthur has been creating stories in her head since she was a child, and scribbling them down nearly as long.  She credits an early fascination with male interpersonal relationships (and “The Young Riders”) with her later discovery of and subsequent affair with m/m romance stories.  When not writing, she can be found in her kitchen, pretending she’s an amateur chef and trying to not poison herself with her cuisine experiments.

Contact her at with your cooking tips (or book comments). You can also find her online (, on Tumblr ( and on Twitter (@AM_Arthur).


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